Still reading

As a brief update: I'm still re-reading what I have already written in the aftermath of the stressful move! I am seeing errors while I go that I want to correct, but I will save it for when I have completed the first draft, otherwise I'll never get going again! LOL

Par example: in the opening of Chapter One, I have Crayl and Umielle laying out on a grassy bank, and halfway through the first chapter, Crayl is back in the same spot, only he's hiding behind boulders!

D'oh!!!!!!!!!!!!